Boy And Girl. Fan Time

Her chin touched the chain and the end of the beam. Her head was spinning. It seemed like forever when she heard voices approach. She heard laughter then a couple bottles tossed into a trash can. She listened intently as she heard leather strap sounds and the clink of light chain. She then heard a womans hoarse voice croak out "No... where are you taking me... no" The response was laughter "Time to get you some dinner and drinks since all you've had is dick to eat today." "You're a lucky little slut. You get to eat and sleep tonight. They're gonna have fun with the other one tonight." Erin heard the woman groan as they must have moved her to a standing position. As she was intently listening to that conversation she never heard anyone approach but her hood was yanked up. She blinked to focus her eyes. She saw a slender woman with shoulder length brown hair being lead away. She had welts and red marks all over her back and butt. She needed help walking. She almost looked familiar but. I'm not a daughter either. PPS I'm not a mod.(Repeating, to make up the characters requirement)Given that one of my stories just sunk into oblivion, you'd think it ain't the best time to play marketing guru. strangely though it made me wonder what gets a story readership. here's what the suggestions are. -1. English. please.0. make a respectable plot. "daddy" helps. try being original. "daddy helps". make it short. came, saw, now for conquering.1. make a nice name. short crisp yet hard on-able. "daddy" is helpful. "daughter" "mother" and all female relatives make for good titles. add "slut" "slave" or "whore" for good measure. people writing in gay genre ignore point 1.2. again I say, make it short. like a miniskirt, but not like a dick. if you can't, make an apealing title and add the rest in subtitle.3. add tags, lots of them don't overtly abuse them, but even if a hint is there, go for it. as one author put it, tags are free ad-boards. 4. always know your genre. don't post in dark.
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